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Post #61695

Author
TIE Pilot
Parent topic
Star Wars DVD Covers
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Date created
28-Aug-2004, 3:23 PM
Absolutely amazing work , Scara. Thank you for posting these for us to use.

Please don't take this the wrong way, because these are incredible, but I did notice a few grammatical errors..

ANH - "realises" (european spelling?), "to be taken care off"

ESB - "in search off Jedi Master Yoda"

ROTJ - The first paragraph is one really long run-on sentence

Again, I'm not trying to diminish what you have done, because they kick total ass, I'm just trying to help you make them as perfect as they can be.