This part of the story feels a bit clunky to me. I think it might not be Star Wars-y enough.
Meh. It's just a first draft.
More to come soon.
Post #614533
- Author
- McFlabbergasty
- Parent topic
- A Post-ROTJ Trilogy: What's To Come for the Big Three, And More
- Link to post in topic
- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/614533/action/topic#614533
- Date created
- 12-Dec-2012, 3:18 PM