You've got some great cut ideas!
Of course, I totally understand you're just starting out - so I'll forgive technical details.
But the ideas themselves are great! I like cutting out the "The ambassadors of the supreme chancellor wish to board immediately" shots, as well as your lovely cut of the atrocious intro to Anakin. It works much more... naturally now. It feels more like Star Wars. Good job!
Post #608015
- Author
- aalenfae
- Parent topic
- Idea: my first steps into a larger world
- Link to post in topic
- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/608015/action/topic#608015
- Date created
- 16-Nov-2012, 12:57 PM