Padme's line isn't bad, it's Anakin's.
I remember back in the day there were a lot of Jake interviews where he would repeat the mantra that he was just a kid or just a normal kid.
If those lines were used instead of "I'm a person and my name is Anakin" the scene would improve no end.
Indeed that line would be good to use every time someone called him Annie.
Yeah, a great idea.
Basically an official Fan Edit PT:SE.
As long as the originals were available to purchase and see I'd be very interested to see what a big studio could do when compared to some of the fan reworkings.