Damn you! I thought I was being oh-so original in killing off Han in the first half of Part VII in my own fan-fiction set after RoTJ.

Unlike your story, mine's not realised as a screenplay but instead it's a trilogy of books. Can I just ask you, what made you kill off Han? I did it because I found the character impossible to write for. He just seemed surplus to requirements during/after RoTJ and the Han that we all know and love and died in that carbon slab. Also, it satisfies Harrison Ford's idea that Han should die, which reinforces the feel of TESB, which is that heroes are mortal and are not infallible.

Anyway, great job so far. I like the echoes of the past in Jeni being told a falsehood about her father's death. Like you, I've only taken the films as canon and have disregarded the EU in my own humble efforts.