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Sky_ said:
Version 1 http://youtu.be/qb_JiBC89pA
Version 2 http://youtu.be/pxrBOTru98E
Version 3 http://youtu.be/7cczdSuQu_U
Version 4 http://youtu.be/3tnjp263ssg improved Render Quality tweaked lighting and differnt soundtrack
Again, some nice work there Sky_.
Here's some more of my own thoughts on your latest versions -
1. I'm personally not keen on the way your 4th version shows the letters coming towards us initially. (and additionally, we can't tell that the last 2 letters to go offscreen are an 'a' and an 'n' , as they just look like plain black lumps taking up screentime compared to the legible 'a', 'd', 'y', and 'w' letters that pass. I'd have preferred to see those 2 at different angles like the others, so that we could see what letters they were too, before they then recede away to come together)
I still prefer to just use the portion of the sequence where the letters are starting to RECEDE AWAY from us before they come together...although I realise this means that whatever accompanying music used will need to be shortened too. I reckon this would still seem long enough and impactful enough an image overall though.
2. I'm also not keen on the yellowish background from the lighting effects at the start, and far prefer the lettering to initially appear on a BLACKER background more along the lines of what was shown at the beginning of your 1st version.
But I really like how the small travelling 'sparkle' along the bottom of the word 'presentation' looks now in your 4th version. And I see you've spaced out the letters in 'an' a bit now which looks better too. However, I reckon the background lighting effects in your 4th version should move a little quicker before they disappear so that the whole image doesn't stay in place for so long. And of course, I'd like to see the whole image FADE OUT once the background lighting has finished moving behind the letters.
3. Personally, I'm also not keen on the added 'Darth Vader' image above the letters either, nor the 'debris' that moves to make it come together. However, I really liked your new accompanying music on the 4th version, and absolutely love the added 'Vader breathing' sound to finish things off. I reckon I like the 4th version mix equally as much as I like the original snippet of the 'Imperial March' being used. Very nicely done.
If you could be bothered, something I'd REALLY love to see tried out is a version along the lines of the very original adywan logo movements...but done using your latest BLACK and GOLD-edged lettering, against a black background or 'starfield', followed by the kind of lighting effects you've shown in the 4th version as the other wording appears.
Either way, I'll certainly be interested to see what colours/movements/music/fonts/background/and timing adywan ends up deciding on eventually.
