i'd love to see both the newer beginning and the ending you've got so far. lower quality is fine as long as people can make out what is going on.The scene of the Deacon birth feels really awkward and there's really no reason for it in the story - he's now alone on a planet we'll probably never see again. Regarding Vickers...when Shaw is trying to get away from the falling ship it crashes down on her and then in we have her suit saying something like 'you have 2 minutes of air left' - maybe some of that stuff could be re-tooled to imply that Vickers was merely trapped? I'd much rather see Vickers survive than Shaw. I've had a bit of an idea for the dream sequence that might work for everyone but not sure, i need to check out a few things first.