Woah, Ive realized ive made a lot of changes that youve posted Johnny Ringo! Expecially removing the closeup of holloway's eye, the howling, and trimming/moving the transmission promo.

as for the quiet eye promo, I still dont like the theatrical dream sequence, that and the isle of skye intro for her paint her as a main character; when she actually does very little in the film. plus both give is blunt exposition we will find out later (in blunt expostion form nonetheless "these glyphs all have something in common"/"will it bring your father back?")

Shes more of a catalyst, and her introductions now are her "hopeful hello" in transmission, and the quiet eye promo, both point her her as an ambitious person whos on an even more ambitious journey, And add more character towards her. The Yutani logo and visual gibberish in quiet eye paint this scene as:

A: David is looking into Shaws dreams, with yutani technology, analyzing her recurring dream (due to multiple phone calls similar in nature) of the events prior to launch.

or...

B: David is looking not into her dream, but the application in waylands file on her, as he wouldhave done with everyone else on the ship, with, you guessed it, yutani technology. Making the reveal of David looking into more things like dreams EVEN creepier when its brought up.

I am a cheap bastard and running out of space on my drop box. I may start up a new account to upload the new files.

I will most likely replace the opening 12 minute clip, with a newer opening 20, and replace the opening hour with 2 45 minute ish clips from the middle and end. I like how the ending is coming together, but it still is unsatisfying.

case in point: this film feels like 2/3's of a film still. And that cant be fixed in editing really. But i am impressing myself in how its coming together and am excited to not have to watch prometheus in detail ever again.