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Post #596833

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gobalicious
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Return of the Jedi: Dan Edit - Clips Online (Released)
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Date created
19-Sep-2012, 11:10 PM

daneditor said:

I've been working on this so-called experimental edit of ROTJ again the last few weeks, and have made some pretty big changes.

Here's the new opening of the movie to show what I mean:

http://www.mediafire.com/?f9p83mns4kkudz8

To put it in context, here's the crawl that immediately precedes that opening:

Relentless in their pursuit of the Rebellion, Imperial forces led by Darth Vader have pushed the Alliance to the fringes of the galaxy.

Meanwhile Luke Skywalker has returned to Dagobah, believing that only a fully trained Jedi will be powerful enough to rescue Han Solo from the clutches of vile JABBA THE HUTT.

While the Rebellion appear doomed, the Empire has begun construction on a second DEATH STAR.

In their most desperate hour, two Rebel Spies have successfully penetrated Imperial defences on the capital planet of Coruscant, and stolen plans to the terror weapon. Now they must flee the system and safely deliver the plans to the Alliance....

This edit now includes footage from the following Star Wars fan films:

Broken Allegiance

Vader Extincion

Revelations

Seeds of Darkness

Knightquest

SW:THX

Tydirium

Also, there is footage from the ROTJ deleted scenes, from the Interactive Board Game, and from Star Tours 2.

The edit is online now. If anyone wants it just PM me.

This looks absolutely fascinating.

I'm not entirely on board with starting the movie with the rebel spies escaping.  It seems like too much of a rehash of the opening of ANH.  But I'll leave judgement until I see the rest of the edit.

Let me take a stab at the opening crawl.  I'd like to keep the traditional three paragraph format, and shorten it up a bit to be consistent in length with the other movies.

 

After his disastrous duel with Darth Vader, Luke Skywalker has returned to complete his Jedi training under Master Yoda.

Impatiently waiting for Luke, Lando Calrissian has infiltrated the palace of vile gangster Jabba the Hutt in hopes of rescuing Han Solo.

With the Rebel Alliance scattered across the galaxy, the Empire has begun construction on a second Death Star.  In a daring mission, two rebel spies have stolen plans for the weapon and now flee carrying the last hope for the Rebellion....