That's cool, and I'll admit that the virgin birth in isolation isn't *so* bad without the prophecy stuff making more out of it.
Also, about the final space battle, I wonder if there is a video game or some other source out there to lift dialogue from to create some "chatter" from the mystery pilot. He could say something like, "I'm going in... target acquired... it's a hit!" or something along those lines. Might help sell the idea. I do like the idea, as it helps shift the role of protagonist for Episode I to Obi-Wan (and Qui-Gon). Anakin can take over later in Episodes II and III.
Again, I enjoyed this edit more than I have any other, and look forward to seeing II and III when my wife and I get the chance.