I really liked the red around the patient. I wonder if, with the air mask, it obscures the features too much in the bacta tank. Additional shots of the others looking into the bay at the tank could be added.

When the MF jumps into hyperspace at the end, were there any shots of it coming out with the ships of the fleet on the other side?

In the ROTJ reb briefing, it could cut away to the distant shot right after "Your the respectable one/". It would cut out "remember" and the "Awwww, that's our Han." smile from Lando.

R2 displays holo-recordings of the action while 3PO tells the Ewoks the tale?;/