I have one question and one suggestion.
I'll start with the suggestion. Personally, I kind of find the name "Jeni" - or at least the spelling of "Jeni" - for your protagonist kind of weak. Could you perhaps throw an "H" or another extra letter or two in there, to give it some oomph?
As for the question ... It's kinda silly, but it's one of those things I'm always obsessing over; what colour is Jeni's lightsaber supposed to be? Is it the standard blue/green, or something more exotic?
Post #591952
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- DuracellEnergizer
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- A Post-ROTJ Trilogy: What's To Come for the Big Three, And More
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- 27-Aug-2012, 9:16 PM