Yes, very nice. I agree with timdiggerm and obikal: maybe some more visual inference that lasers are still firing. But even if you don't do that, I think it's great as is! It's not hard to believe Jango held off on firing or that Obi-wan had made a turn that Jango didn't follow for a moment. Again, brilliant work as always, Aal!
Post #591843
- Author
- darth_ender
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- Aalenfae's PREQUEL TRILOGY (Heavily delayed - computer exploded)
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- 27-Aug-2012, 12:51 PM