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Post #591692

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Bingowings
Parent topic
Batman Forever - 2012 Remix (* unfinished project *)
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Date created
26-Aug-2012, 6:32 PM

There are plenty of examples of unnecessary exposition in the film.

If there is a shot showing something we don't need to hear an actor telling us what we are seeing.

It might be fun to collect dialogue from Tommy Lee Jones' back catalogue and cultivate two voices for his two faces.

A plain Tommy Lee voice for the DA side to balance the deranged croaking of the acid scarred side.

If the roof top sequence is moved to after the circus we don't need Batman in Chase's bedroom and we don't need the Batsmile.

Have Bruce driven to tell her he is Batman because of his reaction to what Dick is doing and what the newscaster is saying not just because he wants her to want into his drawers instead of the Bat's tights.

This bit needs to go too :