Magnolia your version is much better. I like it. You make them concise and deliberate as we want our menacing evil and prevailing good characters to be. Strong, knowledgable and assertive. All these lines Lucas is doing with "umm" "I think" "uhhh" "huh" "how is that" etc...irritating! And why doesn't he just have the commentary by him be the audio of the film. "OK this is the emperor you're seeing now as the senator, ok this is anakin liking the senator now and being pissy...you can see where this is going, but I am going to beat it into you 10 more times assuming you are retarded." Dubbing over all lines, spelling everything out for us and explaining how this crap was his vision all along, why he hates the fans that made it what it is so he could tinker with it in the first place, and really say why its all so much better NOW. Damn.