Idea about Jango and the assassination plot:
Any reason Zam needs to stay in the movie at all?
What about cutting out the worm assassination attempt and ensuing chase out all altogether?
General order of events:
(Seciors has a great new intro idea for Ep 2 over at fanedit.org - have the movie start with Count Dooku and the Emperor)
- landing dock assassination attempt
- Padme deleted scene addressing the Senate
- Obi and Anakin scene in front of the Jedi Council being tasked to investigate the threat, and for Anakin to protect Padme
- Anakin and Padme packing scene (need re-introduction just before this scene?)
- Anakin and Padme departure scene - instead of registered transport, they board a different ship (idea to come below)
- As they are leaving, Jango shows up just outside the Coruscant atmosphere to shoot them down - Anakin shows off his flying skills and blasts into hyperspace just in time - should be easy Aalenfae! XD
- Obi deleted scene of analyzing the toxic dart - redubbed to say "unusual shrapnel found at the Senator's landing dock"
Continue from here...
These wouldn't be all the scenes, just a general flow.
Aalenfae, love the idea that you're working on more than just Ep 3! Your work has all been great! Thanks!