aalenfae said:

Thanks for the high praise, MrInsaneA!
Though I am still tweaking it! :)

Titus, I like your idea about not showing Jango's face at all during the scene. It might work pretty well, and I'll give it a try.
And I think your point about the ships just flying around doing nothing is valid. Watching the clip again, it does seem like they just fly around doing nothing for a little too long. I'll see what I can do.

(And yes, I can't wait until I get some good 1080 footage of "1313" cutscenes. But that'll have to wait until the game's out, probably.)

I wouldn't say they're doing nothing. They're avoiding asteroids. Add some music, I'm sure it will heighten the tension. And as far as Jango goes, don't cut too much out, or you won't have a scene at all!