zombie84 said:
So, I'm posting this little clip. The one consistent complaint people had was that they didn't like my approach to the Zhora scene, where the deleted scene cut-to-black jumps right into the fight. I'm still using a bit of a jump, but I do think the scenes plays out much more naturally, and actually develops as a scene. I cut out the effeminate sounding character Deckard plays, because that's not in the deleted scene, instead he just charms his way in there using his regular ol' wits and Zhora gets the better of him, very similar to the film minus the altered voice Deckard uses. I did a bit of sound editing and picture cutting to remove a few lines of dialogue in here. Hopefully this version doesn't seem abrupt and incoherant to people the way my first approach did.
Looks good. Its hard to comment as it feels different, which ultimately is why I've been looking forward to your edit, to see the film differently.