Just finished seeing this.

Lots of laughs.

It does drag a bit.

If you decide to return to it and tweak it some more one thing you could do is when Lando is pushing his little button thing it could destroy the landing pad and Slave One allowing our heroes to kill Fett and rescue Han without having to go to Tatooine.

He could be revived on the medical ship.

The fleet could then jump straight into the battle (no need for the briefing).

Luke could forewarned by his dream not bother rescuing his pals at all which makes him seem a bit of jerk.

Yoda could go to Endor to help the ewoks (by swapping the ee and the wook around he could make out he has good relations with them) so Yoda is flown to Endor by Luke where he surrenders himself to Vader for his final confrontation as advised by Yoda.

Don't show Palpatine's ghost on the Death Star just have Luke kill Vader.

When Luke has turned to the darkside the Yoda versus Palpatine fight could be remixed to be a Yoda vs Luke fight which Luke wins (by doing Vader's red eye).

At the victory party he could be visited by the ghosts of Palpatine, Yoda and Ben.

Loved it as it is though.