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Post #586706

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Trooperman
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Info: Episode I: The Jedi Incursion (the TM edit)
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Date created
23-Jul-2012, 2:17 PM

Episode 1: The Jedi Incursion

Episode 2: Shroud of the Dark Side

Episode 3: Revenge of the Sith

Episode 4: Star Wars

Episode 5: The Empire Strikes Back

Episode 6: Return of the Jedi


What I like is that Episode 1 and Episode 6 both have the word “Jedi” in them, book-ending the series.


The only thing I want to commit to doing right now on Episode 1 is replacing all of Jar-Jar’s dialogue with different dialogue, a la the MagnoliaFan edit.

Starting at the beginning, this thread is for rewriting Jar-Jar’s dialogue.   I like when in “Balance of the Force” Jar-Jar takes credit for everything. The idea is that he is arrogant but also lovable and stupid- probably has an Aussie accent although that is not decided yet.

Episode II dialogue is very short:

-I KNOW THAT FACE…OBI-WAN!  HAVEN’T SEEN YOU IN AGES, [MATE]!  NICE BEARD YOU HAVE THERE.  YOUR HIGHNESS…LOOK WHAT THE WOMP RAT DRAGGED IN!

-DON’T WORRY YOUR PRETTY LITTLE HEAD ABOUT IT.  WITH A BRILLIANT POLITICAL MIND LIKE MINE IN CHARGE OF THINGS, WHAT COULD POSSIBLY GO WRONG?

-WE KNOW THE SEPARATISTS ARE PREPARING TO ATTACK THE REPUBLIC!  OUR OWN ARMY IS NOT ENOUGH TO COUNTER THIS ENORMOUS FORCE.  BUT IF WE BESTOW EMERGENCY POWERS ON OUR SUPREME CHANCELLOR PALPATINE, HE <span style=“text-decoration: underline;”>WILL</span> FIND A WAY…TO DEFEND THE REPUBLIC.