Post #586576

Author: ben_danger
Parent topic: A New Star Wars Prequel Trilogy Supertrailer!
Link to post in topic: https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/586576/action/topic#586576
Date created: 22-Jul-2012, 10:52 AM

hey jedi mehdi!

a really good first trailer! i really enjoyed it.

visually it works, you have got good movement, but it does seem a bit 'general' at the moment as far as message is concerned. have you considered perhaps re-cutting it to focus on just one part of the story?

you might want to cut back on the intense fighting in the latter half, and reintroduce more character moments later on.