Ah right, now I remember The Cutter's idea.
It was just so jarring, I think.
And the reason I said things fell apart was because of how the ending is originally edited. But thinking through how I have it edited right now, her dying is actually kind of forced-feeling now.
So I'll explore The Cutter's idea, but I'm still not sure if I like it.
Post #585388
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- aalenfae
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- Aalenfae's PREQUEL TRILOGY (Heavily delayed - computer exploded)
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- 13-Jul-2012, 10:24 PM