At risk of being insistant since we already managed this hypothesis, I yet have one suggestion to make, for you could have possibly forgotten it, which is to re arrange the shots so that it is the Republic who's active and the CSI reactive. It involves taking out one shot of obi wan (with the line "I think this is gonna be easy")

It would set the Republic (even more) in a rather operative mood.

ANAKIN - Master, General Grievou's ship is directly ahead.

OBI WAN (considering Anakin's information, launches the order) - ARC 4 do you copy? Mark my position and set your squad up right behind me"

ARC Pilot - We're on your tail (?) General Kenobi

- Shot of the ARC 170 fighters lining up -

- Shot of the Vulture droids "realising" there's an inminent Republic assault (1: 23)-

- Shot of the ARC 170 fighters closing formation behind the Jedi Fighters (1:45)-

- Shot of a couple of vultures flying towards the republic formation (1:42)

OBI WAN - Let them pass between us.

IF you hadn't forgotten it, but rejected it then I fully understand and I offer you my apologies for insisting.

Greetings