Great job on the revised opening. I actually got a real sense of danger from the droid fighters. I almost thought they wouldn't make it into Grevious's ship. Given total lack of suspense in the original, this is a great accomplishment. Well done.
Post #579828
- Author
- gobalicious
- Parent topic
- Aalenfae's PREQUEL TRILOGY (Heavily delayed - computer exploded)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/579828/action/topic#579828
- Date created
- 3-Jun-2012, 12:06 AM