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Post #577797

Author
darth_ender
Parent topic
The War of the Stars Part II - The Future in Motion (Released)
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Date created
16-May-2012, 11:26 AM

It took me longer than I expected to get through this just because I've been busy.  I have to say that this edit illustrates a number of fine points, particularly how well the deleted scenes could be used.  I still have faint hopes for something like the collaborative ROTJ edit to work out, and if it does, I hope a number of the Jedi deleted material is included in a similar fashion.  Certain choices truly do change the narrative in interesting ways, and I think Jerjerrod's dilemma was particularly interesting and built suspense.  Certain choices were so startling as to be outright hilarious.  I won't spoil it, but the end of Ozzel, "You're feelings for them are strong, especially...you know," rescuing Han, "All too easy."  Many were truly inspired.  Luke's dream sequence in the cave was quite fascinating, and I'm surprised how you were able to integrate the Cloud City portion into it.  It truly raised the tension drastically for that scene.  The ending was pure brilliance, and it's too bad there's no way to make a sequel to all this following your cliffhanger ending.  A very fascinating edit!  Well done!