Argh forget what I wrote about the Green Squadron, that was a different line.

I checked against the script and it's supposed to be "Pressure's steady." with an alien response from Nien Nunb. The script says the navigator says it, so I added an SDH cue. As such, it's clearly within the cockpit and shouldn't be italicized. Also, for the other suggestions I only added Leia's stutter for I want to be alone. The second doesn't sound like a "No" or a stutter to me--just some nonverbal noises she makes. That's all I changed, so I'll sit on these changes for a while and see what else someone might see before uploading.

Just one last thanks to you in case I don't hear from you again--you've been very, very helpful!