As it stands the original version is an interesting deconstruction of the political side of the PT. The plot actually seems smart and thought-provoking when explained from this angle... hmm, I wonder how the prequels would have gone if it followed Palpatine exclusively?
If you're not entirely sold on keeping it near-identical to the original video I would recommend adding some more comparisons to said kind of terrorism as it has appeared in real life. A little bit of elaboration on the history of False Flag terrorism a tiny bit here and there would really help; even just little tidbits of real-life examples that directly relate to the element of false flag terrorsim being discussed at the moment scattered throughout might be good. At certain points, it feels a little like plot summary.
Also, if the original video really WAS made in Movie Maker, I'm really impressed. I know firsthand how limiting it can be.