daneditor said:
Here's the rebels landing on Endor with some footage from a fan film added, just to see how it would look:
Visually, this works very well.
Pacing and plot wise, I'm confused.
I'm not sure why we need to show the imperials watching the shuttle land where it's not supposed to. What does this show? Does this mean they know these are rebels? Are they alerting base that they've seen this? Are these supposed to be the same biker scouts that we see a few minutes later?
And I think the binocular shot watching the shuttle carries on for a bit too long. You can definitely cut that to just the landing part to communicate the same thing.