Chewtobacca said:

CatBus said: I'm agreeing with all of your corrections (even "deflector screens") except the exclamation mark. Although the line delivery is definitely unexcited, I think the exclamation still fits in context.

That was the only correction that I didn't agree with either. I would always use an exclamation mark there because the remark is constructed as an outcry.

Yeah, I guess you guys are right, an exclamation mark could be fitting there. Btw if you want even more completeness, Threepio utter the words "Oh, no" after the laser blast hit near him, before he says, "I'm going to regret this." when he enter the escape pod.

Chewtobacca said:

I didn't know that some of the lines were clearer in the mono mix than the stereo, because I always listen to the latter, so I'll have to listen to that line again.

Yes, I noticed that the Mono mix was of good use when I did my subs due to the unprocessed dialogue in the Death Star battle, why they got rid of the synthesized voices and static distortions in the Mono mix I cannot understand, it was one of the things that made the Stereo mix sound so impressive and real.

Chewtobacca said:

I listened to the mono mix and, while it could be either, it definitely sounds more like their. Interesting!

It probably is, the script also support this but I can honestly not hear the difference, especially not in the Stereo mix. Maybe you can hear it with headphones. I actually think the lines in the published script are based on the mono mix IIRC.