darth_ender said:

Yeah, I think every editor must say that. Wow, Ron, you've really put a lot of work into this. I'm sure it will be helpful. I'll give people a few days to review it before putting up the vote. Let me know if there are specific aspects you want me to put up, since I can't imagine voting on every little detail.

I can't think about the changes there are just too many to list It would take me a whole day to list them I think...like an essay... there are so many things moved cut and added This cut is for reference I did my best and I flaked out at the celebrations a bit... but the ideas and cuts are all there so It's worth a go but certainly needs more tightening at the very end and in places but I have to call it somewhere and this is it... I won't be doing another rough take or amending anything it's now over and complete for me on this rough storyboard take.

I cannot spend anymore time with this now but will partake in voting and stuff for sure.

I ripped out ROTJ's guts and handed it back in a bag :) I don't even know if the main idea works as well as I would like it to now but there is a better way to do the celebrations at the end for sure. It is very heavy editing cut but somehow not alot is lost.

I followed the script Very close in alot of things but deviated where I felt I wanted to go in a different direction