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Post #563923

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Ronster
Parent topic
Collaborative Fanediting: An ROTJ Proposition (BACK ON TRACK WITH EMANSWFAN AT THE HELM--SEE POST 1488 OR OP FOR A LINK!)
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Date created
12-Feb-2012, 2:59 PM

darth_ender said:

I think we can keep them out of the same shots, and like I said, we'll put it up for a vote.  I may be in the minority.

I have started assembling a complete rough cut today from all I have done already... And was listening to Han while they are on shuttle tydirium trying to get clearance and Han says "there are plenty of command ships" So for me thats a green light for the eclipse and the executor... If somthing like my opening mock-up is a liked voted for idea then Vader should jump in on the executor after the 2 star destroyers are crippled this would also mean vader shows up at DSII as in the script you have already put up D and if the Ralph Mcquarrie tribute is liked then I will go with your suggestion that it should be the eclipse as it suits the emperor much better. And would make more sense that Han also says this line.

But as MrInsaneA has just said I don't want the executor being outdone

So I fixed the cut to obi-wan by cutting you cannot escape your destiny also and it works well this way... I have Observed all other cuts except C3PO telling the story because I don't think it works all that well and luke "Vader is here now on this moon" because he could have been coming from somewhere else on Endor not neccesarily from The Executor or DSII.

Did Vader choking Jejerod in rough and it's ok but has problems the walk towards down the hall does not quite make it up to the camera from lukes lightsabre deleted scene so his appearance on the edge of the screen will need to be re-timed and delayed when cutting to jejerods conflict first scene via masking and compositing. added line from the interactive board game "The responsibility is yours commander" as is all that would work somewhat well just a disrespect to him really and then he gets in the lift from lukes lightsabre deleted scene resumed.