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Ronster
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Collaborative Fanediting: An ROTJ Proposition (BACK ON TRACK WITH EMANSWFAN AT THE HELM--SEE POST 1488 OR OP FOR A LINK!)
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Date created
10-Feb-2012, 9:35 AM

darth_ender said:

That would be great.  I was around 15 minutes into it, paused it to do some studying, came back to it, and it set it back to the beginning :(  But I promise I'll get to it, even if you aren't able to export it again.  It really is fun to see some of your ideas in motion, even if I don't see all of them as a perfect fit for our edit.  You have many interesting ideas.

I am really glad you said that because I had planned to do this post before but had no time....

What I have done is my take but not all my ideas so I wished to do some acknowledgements of how I came to what I have produced.

New Opening scene

Opening Crawl: Darth Ender

Home 1 opens as the first scene : Me

Boba Fett Delivers the plans : Who ever done the mock-up on youtube

Plans Sent via transmission : Bingowings

Bigger Opening : sorry but the name escapes me of the guy that done the previous mock-ups using star trek footage for bothans

Stronger tougher Vader: Mithrandir

Need main characters to make a scene plausible : Bingowings

Vader Lines Interactive Board Game : Darth Ender

Dagobah

Yoda Gives Luke the Crystal : Johannus

Wanted to do cuts from the script but ran out of time sorry D_E :(

Luke goes tatooine / Beggars Canyon

Changes to audio lines :Me

Beggars Canyon Sequence : Me

New audio Lines for Luke : Indirectly but Fishmanlee provided me with inspiration on this

Jabbas Palace

Observed cuts from the script but kept droid torture but cut the stupid tentacle grabbing C3PO: Darth Ender Script amongst others views

Re-Cut Lapti-Nek : Jaita amonst others versions to create this different take.

Drumming in the Rancors Lair: Me but inspired by Fishmanlee and Bingowings wanting more Tribal Arabic music but the street singer did not work :( (yes I tried to do this) so this is what I came up with as a substitute more primative rather than Exotic arabic

Cut Boush / Leia hitting the chimes in the arch while creeping about: Spence

Cutting Boba flirting : Many people agreed on this

Coruscant

revealing the Imperial Palace: Theodo amonst others really wanting to see Coruscant as was intended to be in ROTJ originally

The shot of the imperial Palace big nod to Ralph Mcquarrie : Angel came up with this idea

Executor picks up Emperor: Darth Ender (but I modified from the eclipse)

Sarlac Pitt

Added Music cues from Jerry goldsmith Planet of the apes: Me

Sandworms on Tatooine are normal food for the sarlac: myself but inspired by a youtube video wormsign on tatooine check it out it's quite funny.

Boba Fett Sequence : Kind of listening to everyone in dissaray about what to do about boba remove him keep him in etc so yeah I just wanted to chop his head off whilst giving the coolest star wars character a bigger part in ROTJ

Parting of ways / Lars Homestead

"I need to be alone for a while" : Darth Enders audio cue essentially was the seed to create the scene that I came up with at the Lars homestead instead of hear him say it show it...

Falcon deaparts into Hyperspace : Me and it fell into place naturally also It is a shame that we never saw Han and chewie in the falcon together again in ROTJ so I wanted to fix this one last time as we know them so well as the best of shipmates

Feeling more unsure about lukes psyche : Bingowings amonst others saying they wanted to feel more unsure about luke and I did my best with this when they part ways after the sailbarge is destroyed

So I hope this post helps people not think I am trying to push my ideas alone as many of them have been born from others ideas albeit I did it slightly differently I have been listening whilst trying to come up with this storyboard scripting suggestion very intently and am aiming to mesh alot of ideas together into a cohesive whole So when you say my ideas some of them in fact most of them are actually your ideas?!?

thanks for reading....

Will upload a fixed version of the part 3 in a bit

Edit: There is a problem with the file if anyone can offer up any suggestions would be helpfull it wont close the file off 99% and won't complete