Sorry, wrote that last bit in a hurry and I worry it sounded rude. I'm glad you liked the script. I think it can make for a really great film. The Bothan part is probably going to be all or nothing. The reason for omitting the mention of Sullust is actually because I want the Emperor's revelation to Luke that he allowed the Rebels to get the plans to be more of a surprise for the audience as well. And Sullust is mentioned by name in the opening crawl in this case :) Thanks for taking the time to read it.