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Post #562824

Author
Mrebo
Parent topic
Collaborative Fanediting: An ROTJ Proposition (BACK ON TRACK WITH EMANSWFAN AT THE HELM--SEE POST 1488 OR OP FOR A LINK!)
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Date created
6-Feb-2012, 11:01 PM

I enjoyed the script very much. At first I was confused about showing a Bothan but omitting mention of their name by Mothma and showing Sullust but omitting its name. I am guessing it was to substitute the visuals for dialogue which would be redundant as well as to depict the Emperor as less aware of what was going on? That definitely works well. But I do like Mothma's line ("Many Bothans died to bring us this information") and wonder if most of the line might be left in, why exclude their name?