Magnolia, I just watched both your edits last night, back to back and it so vastly improved the pace and story. Wow, EP II went from a good movie to an awesome one. I will get back to you with specifics as I write them down of the edit when I come up with a throrugh list of my thoughts. But overall, a great improvement, most of my changes would be minor for the most part.

Now as for Ep III. , here's a title, Yoda at the end of EP II has an ominous look on his face and he says the Shroud of the Dark Side has fallen. And it is a zoomed-up, poignant moment leading into the credits. So, how about "The Fallen Shroud" it works very well using Yoda's/GL's own dramatic words. Further it refers specifically about it not being a "victory" as Obi-Wan alludes after winning the battle on Geonosis. It states that a presence known as Darth Sideous may have been clouding Jedi thoughts and may have control of much of the Senate...know they are becoming aware of this...the shroud falls...