Personally I suggest you stick just with self-reference. Like you said, the choppiness was off-putting for some, so you don't want to make it excessive, and the same goes for the joke. It's probably funniest just leaving it in reference to Obi-wan. But please keep it for himself.
Post #561751
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- darth_ender
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- Episode II: Attack of the Ridiculousness ***NEW 14 MONTH ANNIVERSARY DVD NOW AVAILABLE***
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- 30-Jan-2012, 10:43 PM