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Post #561505

Author
Ronster
Parent topic
Collaborative Fanediting: An ROTJ Proposition (BACK ON TRACK WITH EMANSWFAN AT THE HELM--SEE POST 1488 OR OP FOR A LINK!)
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Date created
28-Jan-2012, 5:20 PM

Ok so I got my suggestion put together for a new opening/begining no audio and no scenes with vader as I did plan to but don't want to spend anymore time if this gets shot down so Vader is on the last star destroyer that jumps in and the sequence would end on him looking out the window or choking an admiral of the other star destroyer undecided but I would need an overwhelming response of yes this is a really good idea to develop it further but this is a way ROTJ could start....Or perhaps ditch it or draw inspiration from it

The first shot is intended to be immediatley after the opening crawl

Basically Bobba Fett sends a transmission of the plans to home one after they pay him which would be displayed on the screen inside slave 1 after this all hell breaks loose

Audio lines are:

Rebels on radio bobas cockpit"Do you have it?"

Boba "After I get Paid"

after star destroyers jump in madine looks about " Star destroyers have enetered our sector!"

could use some pilots!!!

Madinde "prepare to make the jump to hyperspace on my mark" after he lost lots of souls bless him

Vaders lines from Interactive Boardgame undecided

http://www.mediafire.com/?yh38u0d8a5dx831

To join the dots the audio in the briefing from mon mothma is changed to "The infomation brought to us(cut by the Bothan spies) pinpoints(add sss) the exact location of the deathstar" and "Many (cut Bothan spies) died bringing us this infomation"