BarBar Jinkx said:

I always HATED the way SLJ delivered the line "A Sith lord?" and in any edit I do that is usually the first thing to go! have you tried the scene without it?

Hi Aalenfae, first off, I've been watching this thread (and Bob's) closely anxiously awaiting these releases, thank you for your time and efforts! Things are looking great!

Second off, in the above mentioned quoted text, what about having SLJ say "A Sith...." and his voice trails off in contemplation? Have a worried look on his face after the line delivery? (slow down audio/video for greatest effect - but not so much to look like it's slowed down - just more of a silent pause as the full force of this revelation hits him - no pun intended)

Also, what do you think about SLJ's "I sense a plot to destroy the Jedi." especially in this recent edit? Do you feel that it is necessary exposition for the later Windu/Palp fight when Windu feels the need to murder him? Or is it redundant with Anakin's revelation?

Thanks again for your hard work, I'm really looking forward to this edit!