Post #560523

Author: Jaitea
Parent topic: Collaborative Fanediting: An ROTJ Proposition (BACK ON TRACK WITH EMANSWFAN AT THE HELM--SEE POST 1488 OR OP FOR A LINK!)
Link to post in topic: https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/560523/action/topic#560523
Date created: 22-Jan-2012, 4:08 PM

I like it, though the Xwings fly-through needs cutting down....or cut out completely, perhaps just an establishing shot of the Xwing landed in a canyon or something