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darth_ender
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Collaborative Fanediting: An ROTJ Proposition (BACK ON TRACK WITH EMANSWFAN AT THE HELM--SEE POST 1488 OR OP FOR A LINK!)
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Date created
16-Jan-2012, 8:33 PM

So here is the second round of voting.  This was a quick look through and description, and it still took me a long time.  I didn't even bother organizing it that well like I did for the last one.  I did include many links to ideas to assist in understanding the logic behind the suggestion, and I even included ideas that the original proponent backed off on.  The only ideas I deliberately skimmed were the Bothan/Death Star plans scenes, considering most were voted down the first time, and I just want to see if it's worthwhile to continue exploring the idea.  Please look it over and let me know if I missed a suggestion you've already made (don't give me any new ones, please).  And voting won't start till tomorrow, giving folks a chance to let me know if I missed something.  If you vote early, you might miss something.

Final note: the PM box only handles so many characters.  Don't PM me.  I've created a new email address just for this edit.  Tomorrow when voting begins, I will provide the new email address.

With no further delay, the items for consideration:

Fishmanlee’s alternate music cues: (Please compare to the original cues)

The Iron Door: 

Bounty for a Wookiee (SE Version) NEWER: 


Sail Barge Assault Alternate NEWEST: 


Ben and Luke on Log NEW: 


Father and Son: 


The Lightsaber: 


Leia Breaks The News Alternate: 
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RLidns6SSMM&feature=related
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w_K8HL0psC8&feature=channel_video_titlehttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X8eCuzn5q5U&feature=relatedhttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=USlGlb_D9DM&feature=channel_video_titlehttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dSIG6oSCmJY&feature=relatedhttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ek2YLVnzgwQ&feature=channel_video_titlehttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RoYbpEyY-Y8&feature=channel_video_title

Have Boba Fett take off before the sail barge scene and we don’t see him again

 

Ships to include in the Battle of Endor:

            More B-wings

            More Mon Calamari cruisers

            Alternate Mon Calamari designs

            Clearly larger Home One

            BTL-B Y-wings

            Victory-class Star Destroyers

            Recusant-class light destroyers

            Beat up Naboo N-1 fighter cameo

            Beat up Z-95 Headhunter cameo

            Beat up ARC-170 fighters

            Larger main communications Star Destroyer (mentioned in the novel as "one of the larger Destroyers--"the Empire's main communications ship."

            Other less- or non-canonical ships (be specific)

            And even more other less- or non canonical ships (be specific)

Alternate fighter markings (i.e. green painted X-wings)

TheoOdo’s alternate plot with Coruscant (I know Coruscant was already voted down in most cases, but this clear a plot had not yet been presented, and I feel it only fair to include it)

Have Madine die on the second destroyed Mon Cal cruiser instead of the first

Include a brief clip where the Rebel’s take out the main communications Star Destroyer as described by darth_ender

Include a brief clip where B-wings destroy a Star Destroyer as described by darth_ender

Have Hayden Christiansen as Anakin’s Force ghost

Have Sebastian Shaw as Anakin’s Force ghost

Include a Ric Olie cameo

If Ric does make a cameo, have him die

Have Ric Olie voiced by TV’s Frink (since Ric would be an old man at this point anyway)

Instead of a specific Bothan scene, I just want a straight up or down vote, and in the third round we can hammer out a specific vision of incorporating them; include any kind of Bothan scene or Death Star plans delivery?

Show the Rebels suffering more losses during the Battle of Endor

Show the Imperials fleeing after the loss of the Executor

Show the Imperial fleet protecting the Death Star, then being destroyed in its explosion

Vader cracks glass when talking to Luke on the Endor landing platform in anger

Death Star is like Centerpoint Station, capable of destroying distant stars

Death Star has a powerful circular beam that emanates from its equator

There are two Death Stars, the first truly non-functional, the second hidden and truly dangerous (Luke is aboard the second)

Boba Fett shoots Luke’s hand (editing his shooting at Luke on the other skiff with Luke being hit in the hand)

Extend the Dagobah opening greatly, as suggested by Johannus

Extend it slightly with only Yoda giving Luke a crystal for his lightsaber, but not the rest of suggested extension

Star Destroyer docks with Death Star

If Duel of the Fates is used, consider other Williams versions 1 and 2

Transition from Dagobah to Death Star to Tatooine something along the lines of this (note that the vote-winning Beggar’s Canyon flythrough would not fit this scheme)

Include Luke saying, “I have a promise to keep to an old friend,” referring to rescuing Han on Tatooine.

Use the Sentinel shuttle in place of the Lambda shuttle as the captured shuttle used by Han and Co.

MrInsaneA’s requested background improvements

http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/545/nazimonitor.jpg

http://public.sn2.livefilestore.com/y1pjeAzVKMdslAa9lqCMeQdYb8Mfwz9TBc8nh_UsL7K6crKsDZxssKaqIjxH0ZpYce5mkOyYrRcOqeOyhsEJSWHYQ/Eye%20droid%202.jpg

http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/5971/armeat.jpg

http://i620.photobucket.com/albums/tt285/nDuTwan/EndorRebeledit.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a115/doubleofive/ROTJ%20Wishlist/Vaderios/roughshit.jpg

 

MrInsaneA’s second round of backdrop requests

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a115/doubleofive/ROTJ%20Wishlist/Vaderios/oralfixations2.jpg

http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/5609/shieldpov.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a115/doubleofive/ROTJ%20Wishlist/Vaderios/dsflyby.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a115/doubleofive/ROTJ%20Wishlist/Vaderios/newarrival.jpg

http://public.sn2.livefilestore.com/y1pjZEJIyYfr09CFoXlRn1Zqlg-G5BB-1IPHvU-IX4VsQ03MkvMcidKMuaNb2XiebbqXMoEHjOOTpXG7DW2HKANvw/Dragon%20carving.jpg

http://public.sn2.livefilestore.com/y1p44xTtY_ywls95oYhdq-HRXyRsJfYexklSZtqDieQ5pkE-e2tCgklDDGUsCMFiEIEzSWMd8mEwFMW7LBL2Ab8Ug/Endor%20waterfall%20base.jpg

http://www.axia.ws/axia/images/posts/lukes_saber.jpg

http://public.sn2.livefilestore.com/y1pYApumaX1V7cmzwOgFoZWpA-mCMwJz7GSsjt61vJn8vOwEuRGjyJr1n1QqNrORTJSi-0BNW_4aS5KVNLpbiKBDQ/BOOM!.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a115/doubleofive/ROTJ%20Wishlist/Vaderios/expcon.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a115/doubleofive/ROTJ%20Wishlist/Vaderios/dssurface.jpg

http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/1561/towert.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a115/doubleofive/ROTJ%20Wishlist/Vaderios/life.jpg

http://public.sn2.livefilestore.com/y1pjLjnMhmuyg99s3qcb9NEJJsznrTiEN6x7OHkDfFB9hqiMiU00x5gcUQIL8HTx4qIO5NQKStR59Bpa

 

“The Street Singer” playing when the droids arrive in Jabba’s throne room

Bingowings’ suggestion on taking out the shield generator

Han and Lando bury the hatchet over Luke’s intercom as they depart from Tatooine (not sure how doable this is)

Vader’s arrival at the Death Star is more significant, with more fighter escort and a larger welcoming entourage

If we do include Bothans, they are like the established EU canon

If we do include Bothans, they are human

Alternate Lapti Nek vocals

Make the Death Star’s orbit around Endor significantly further to be more realistic and emphasize its size (not to mention sparing the lives of Ewoks during the fallout)

More intercom chatter during the starfighter dogfights

TIE cockpit (pilot or window) shots    

More capital ship skirmishes, including a capital ship assault on the Executor prior to the A-wings taking out the generator and bridge

A full Rebel detachment rescues Han

Include HUDs (heads up displays) in the Rebel cockpit shots

As Luke departs Dagobah, he tells R2, “That’s right R2, we’re going to Tatooine [not showing his mouth, planet name taken from ESB].  I have a promise to keep to an old friend.”

Piett deliberately rams the Death Star with the Executor

Vader personally announces the dissolution of the Empire before he dies

Vader personally announces the a ceasefire before he dies

Some other voice announces the defeat of the Empire during the celebration scenes

Working title: Last of the Jedi

Show TIE fighters actually being released from their hangar