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Post #559303

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aalenfae
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Aalenfae's PREQUEL TRILOGY (Heavily delayed - computer exploded)
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Date created
16-Jan-2012, 5:13 PM

I would say contrived and clever ;)
But that's a simply genius idea nonetheless! I've always been a fan of motifs like this, actually. The hopeless fate/destiny kind of thing. 

It only raises a few problems, though.

-Why would she go to Alderaan? There would need to be new dialogue added to explain why they choose Alderaan, especially if Bail isn't adopting Leia.

-I'm not a fan of the look of the shot that The Cutter used.

-Disease would seem random coming from nowhere. It would need to be hinted at earlier.