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Post #558704

Author
Ronster
Parent topic
Collaborative Fanediting: An ROTJ Proposition (BACK ON TRACK WITH EMANSWFAN AT THE HELM--SEE POST 1488 OR OP FOR A LINK!)
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Date created
12-Jan-2012, 2:20 PM

darth_ender said:

Well, my little scene involves few visuals, is short, gets across any additional information anybody wanted, is simply a clue to the story's progression and involves no emotional connection, and fits in with the recent vote.  I think it may be all we need, but I'm not sure everyone liked it.  I like the idea of showing simultaneous DS constructions, but I'm not sure how to pull that off...yet :)

You know all too well what I am talking about... If you open the movie as normal with Vader going to DSII then what do you put inbetween Luke Leaving Dagobah and getting to Tattooine.. The emperors visit stays where it is agreed so thats what I am talking about... It does not need to be Bothans it can be anything I am talking about cuts away and padding.

Ok forget about Bothans look at it like this instead as a series of choices

1. Original opening > Dagobah > Blank > Tattooine

2. Blank > Dagobah > Original Opening > Tattooine

3. Original opening > Tattooine > Dagobah

or my Idea

4. Blank > Dagobah > Original Opening > Blank > Tattooine

Thats what I mean really like I said I don't care about Bothans but I do care about the structure