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Post #558633

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Ronster
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Collaborative Fanediting: An ROTJ Proposition (BACK ON TRACK WITH EMANSWFAN AT THE HELM--SEE POST 1488 OR OP FOR A LINK!)
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12-Jan-2012, 5:17 AM

fishmanlee said:

Vladius said:

Yeah, me neither. It doesn't feel much like Star Wars.

Good, ROTJ was always too much like Star Wars.

Yeah ROTJ was like the ugly duckling of the trilogy, it tried to go in some new directions.... I don't really know what Bothans would look like TBH hairy no doubt I suppose, and I do not care for them at all,

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 you know I don't want to see this guy! but what I do want to see is atleast some suggestion as to the struggle the rebels went through, to get the plans and then perhaps loose them and have them delivered somehow.

The 2 key plotlines are:

Mon-Mothma "Many Bothan Spies Died to bring us this infomation..." She looks overly concerned as if somthing was not right this gives us license for the bounty hunter

Then the twist - Emperor "I let the Rebels Escape with the Plans" or somthing like this, yep I lured them in

Not only that it would be good to see some of this unfold but it would also help to pad out the begining... Win Win in my book, just need to figure out how to do it...

Vader Obviously goes to DSII because the plans were stolen and they need to get ready for the attack by the rebels.

By bringing the rebel fleet into the movie aerlier It might help build more anticipation for the final battle as it all happens so fast in the last third.