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Post #558500

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DominicCobb
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Collaborative Fanediting: An ROTJ Proposition (BACK ON TRACK WITH EMANSWFAN AT THE HELM--SEE POST 1488 OR OP FOR A LINK!)
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11-Jan-2012, 4:56 PM

Captain Antilles said:

fishmanlee said:

ESB: "It is a dark time for the rebellion"
ROTJ: "The Alliance Is Doomed!"

They sure don't match! ;|

The sentiment matches, but the tone doesn't. "It is a dark time for the rebellion" is subtle, but ominous. "The alliance is doomed!" is just plain dramatic.

ESB is supposed to be subtle and ominous. This ROTJ is suppose to be just plain dramatic. I say we keep it.