darth_ender said:
Finally, an even lower quality version of the Battle of Endor.
http://www.4shared.com/video/q9iTMV5P/New_Battle_of_Endor_edit_lo_qu.html
I hope you guys like it. I tried to include segments that could easily be dubbed to suit our story-telling purposes. Like I said, no attack on the communications vessel yet. Please let me know your thoughts, one and all. There are enough differences to warrant another watch if you have already seen my previous version.
Well Done Darth_Ender, I think there are some good ideas in here, but they are mostly carried over from the previous edit....
Here is my feedback and I hope you take it constructivly.
1. Madine does not need to give the order to go to lightspeed or say the force be with us before the battle it would have been better used on the second Mon Calamari cruiser being destroyed as the first was a surprise but I really lol at Aw Shucks!
2.Jejerrod really breaks up the pace when they are going for the reactor on attack run and I think his inclusion kills exitement and he's boring anyway. The placement seems to be kind of correct though which is why he got cut no doubt
3.The time between them starting there assault on the DSII and actually making the attack run is too long apart in time.
4. Your best idea is that the hot-wire opens the door which is fantastic IMO
5. Too Much silly Ewoks / Traps
6.It's hard to Visualise the space battle stills.....I will give it another look... But I liked the inclusion of the gunners on the falcon and thought the placement was well thought out although I would have tried to include some ANH footage also of taking down some ties too.
7.You know my opinion on constantly breaking away to another scene before you have reached any kind of conclusion of any particular plot and the original muddled feel of ROTJ.... I unfortunatly feel you have emphasised this more and caused more confusion with the already jumbled nature of the origoinal. But I understand you like the climaxes to all be happening simultaneously but this was not working well
8. Alot of Audio Dubbing... Probably too much to get away with apart from Fish Face B-wing Pilots there ok