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Post #557246

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Ronster
Parent topic
Collaborative Fanediting: An ROTJ Proposition (BACK ON TRACK WITH EMANSWFAN AT THE HELM--SEE POST 1488 OR OP FOR A LINK!)
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Date created
3-Jan-2012, 7:01 AM

darth_ender said:

Well, I came back and there was some issue with Movie Maker.  I'll try again, but that means I will not get this up till tomorrow.  I promise, no later than tomorrow and you'll have at your fingertips the most amazing crappy, low quality edit of the Battle of Endor evahhhhh!!!

Have you cut the whole movie in rough? That would be a most outstanding effort man.... If it's only the end part that would still be cool....

Darth Ender sorry to do this publicly but I have changed my mind on one of my votes.... The idea of having the pyre on Tattooine has grown on me I would like to change this to a yes if it's possible but happy with the original otherwise....

My thoughts are this Lamda shuttle flying towrds tattooine cut back to celebrations on Endor then cut to SE celebration footage on tattooine instead of having the T-16 over mos-eisley swap this for a Lamda Shuttle (or add a Lamda shuttle?) in the celebrations. Once again cut away to Endor then cut to The Pyre is on a cliff and in the distance we see endless sand dunes go into the distance with 2 setting suns bathing gentle light over the curvy dune sea It pans up as usual to a night sky no force ghost no fireworks and no changes to music. In this case we do not see Luke on Endor celebrating it would need padding out from Endor Celebrations in the original version.

Also expanding upon the previous suggestion about Father & Son on Endor..... Showing a stronger more Violent Vader... Should the glass begin to crack in the tunnel behind Vader as he looks out of the window on Endor?...as if he is applying pressure from the force. I do not want to see it shatter only grow cracks as Vader looks out the window towards the camera. Wether this would include a flash back also of Vaders creation on the operating table or just the normal scene I will explore this later just ideas.

The key to destroying the Falcon lies with cutting Lando's "Yeeha!" and the weird Dude Laughing should probably be replaced with when he is asked to look up from the lost rebels deleted scenes.. The Yeeha would be silent and would serve a momment just before the Falcon explodes to look as if he is screaming. Fireball FX and so fourth after this before final destruction of Falcon and then DSII...

May I add this is my final ideas to explore I am now done with plot expansion/ changes and suggestions.

Looking forward to your rough cut Ender....