This is simply a quickly completed brief script for two scenes involving B-wing action and the Lost Rebel footage. I rely more heavily on the younger female pilot because she's not annoying and we actually have a colored scene for reference if someone is able to color the other clips. We can remove the older woman's only shot if we can't color it. All voices would of course be redubbed:
Attack on the Communications Star Destroyer Scene:
Mon Cal Pilot: Commencing our attack run on the main communications vessel. Cover us, Gray 6 and 7.
Female Pilot 1: Got it.
Two B-wings approach a distant star destroyer from the front.
Sullustan Pilot: We’ll target the shield generators. You hit the tower.
They near the Star Destroyer with a large communications tower on the bridge. The B-wings unload a barrage on the shield domes and peel off to the left and right.
Female Pilot 1: We’re starting our attack run on the main power tree (the pilot’s targeting computer extends).
Two A-wings approach the destroyer, surrounded by laser fire.
Female Pilot 2: I’m hit!
One A-wing explodes. The other continues its approach.
Female Pilot 1: I’m in range.
The lone A-wing launches a barrage of concussion missiles that strike the large tower and leave it in flames while the A-wing veers off right.
B-Wings Destroy a Star Destroyer Scene:
A Mon Calamari cruiser is engaged in broadsides with a star destroyer. The cruiser is clearly receiving the worst of it, with several sections bursting in small explosions. But the destroyer is also taking quite a pounding with several small fires on the hull surface.
Mon Cal Pilot: The Endurance is in trouble. We’re starting our run on that destroyer.
Sullustan Pilot: Right with you.
Three B-wings begin a spinning approach towards the destroyer from the starboard side, unleashing a hail of laser fire and torpedoes, focused on the midsection of the hull. Their concentrated blasts punch a gaping, flaming hole into the destroyer which quickly spreads.
Mon Cal Pilot: Get out of there, Endurance!
The Mon Cal cruiser puts some distance between itself and the burning destroyer. Just after the three fighters cross over the enemy vessel in perfect formation, the star destroyer explodes in a spectacular display.
