I've reviewed most of the script and I like it.

-I think that if the funeral pyre could be moved to Tatooine that would be perfect.

-I personally like the celebrations.

-I think Lando's death would add some gravity.

-I wonder if Leia's first scene with Wicket could be removed entirely. Just thinking here, I just wonder what people think about that.

-You noted that the "general" line is a little weird, I feel like it can just be cut out.

Other than that it looks like you've got everything. Great work!