Well, I thought it might be fun, but you are all probably right. I have completed the script and am currently leaving the idea in the comments, but I think you are all correct that maybe we should simply not include Anakin's ghost at all. Still we should debate the point, but I myself am now leaning that way. Thanks for the mockup Angel, even though you don't even like the idea.
So here is what you've all been waiting for.
http://www.4shared.com/office/-gr9agSq/ROTJ_script_edited_full.html
Sorry it took so long; it's more time consuming than you may think. I've made sure every suggestion could work from an editing point of view, and except for heavy CG additions in the space battle, most of it would be fairly easy to pull off from an editing standpoint (I think, given that I can't do any of these neat tricks). I did not include any new scenes other than reincorporated deleted footage, and personally I see no need for them. Check out the ending in particular, as it really increases the tension drastically, given Jerjerrod's orders to destroy Endor and all that. I will probably redo my rough edit to include more of the space stuff.
I also included several pictures of effects I would love to see included in this edit, all taken from the official wishlist. I would of course love several of the small changes, even down to the nitty-gritty movie errors that all films make and that the likes of Adywan take the utmost care to correct, but I only included the pictures of the big changes I'd like to see visually. This edit could completely work without them, but I think they would enhance the visuals of the film greatly.
Now what I think we should do is have everyone who's interested in contributing ideas make suggestions for alterations or additions. The more I think about it, the less interested I am in filming whole new scenes or subplots (I know Ronster will hate me for this :) But it's up to you guys.
Most importantly, I really want some serious comments from Angel and Aalenfae. I know I call you guys out a lot, but really this project hinges largely on your efforts. How much of what I've written is possible? How much of it do you like and are willing to pull off? Is there anything you'd like to add that I did not include? Are there suggestions for more traditional special effects that we could go for as an alternative: for instance, should someone build a Death Star set or use an X-wing model or something like that?
Thanks for all the help and suggestions thus far, and I hope you guys like what you read. I really think these changes can enhance the movie greatly.