I see your point, especially about the finality of it all. I am still not certain I agree because the point is that this is Vader's redemption (although I don't see such redemption as realistic in any existing supernatural view, considering his many evil acts, as you pointed out). It does seem to be kind of a silly deathbed repentance. But as Vladius said, I also want a happy ending. I guess your last comment actually has me thinking about it more thoroughly, especially the part about their final conversation being the final moment. Great point. I guess we really need to discuss this relatively minor detail. Anyone else have any thoughts?

I should add that, apart from this very detail, the script is now completely done. But I do want to add pictures from the wishlist of suggested changes as well. I have to take care of the kids at this moment, but I will definitely get this up at some point today.